As writers, we have all experienced a common enemy: writer’s block, the paralyzing moment when we can’t find the right words or ideas, and the cursor taunts us by blinking on the empty page. There are various causes for writer’s block. Today, we’ll cover the deep-seated desire for our writing to be perfect immediately.

Some authors like to call the first draft of a story, article, or book a “garbage draft.” That’s my preferred term. Others like “vomit draft.” The purpose of the first draft is to get the story out, regardless of its quality, and those terms help writers keep this mind and to set aside the editor role until later.

Lately, I’ve wondered why we should limit ourselves in this way. I know, that doesn’t sound limiting. It sounds freeing! But I think one can fully embrace the disorder even more.

 

The Power of the Garbage Draft

What is a garbage draft? The idea is simple: the initial draft is crude, unrefined, and far from flawless. It involves allowing the narrative to flow freely onto the page without being limited by a desire for quality control. This change in perspective can be really liberating. This serves as a reminder that the initial draft does not need to be flawless; it simply needs to be present.

Despite using this technique, sometimes writer’s block pops up. I’ve been experiencing this to a degree lately. It’s not enough to stop my writing, but it has been enough to slow it down. So, I wondered, why not take an additional step?

Yes, I’m getting to it now!

 

Permission to Write Rough

What if, rather than passively acknowledging that the initial version may be of poor quality, we deliberately make our initial drafts as rough as possible? This may seem contrary to common sense, but think about it. By letting oneself write poorly, even intentionally writing poorly when we feel stuck, we can get more done. It is not merely acceptable for it to be of poor quality; we write it that way intentionally. Be bold and shut up that internal critic! You can invite them back when it’s time to revise.

 

Embracing the Chaos

Granting yourself permission to write badly, and even doing so intentionally, entails embracing the notion that your initial manuscript may be exceedingly unpolished. You might add scenes you’ll cut later, or discover in revisions that you need to add scenes to make sure the story makes sense. This method can be helpful when you have a sense of stagnation. Rather of worrying about finding the ideal word or creating a flawless scene, you may continue making progress, confident that the polishing process will occur at a later stage.

 

The Joy of Revisions

For many writers, including myself, the most enjoyable part of writing is revising the story. In this stage, you can refine and transform a rough and disorganized draft into a tight and polished narrative.

Your manuscript may need extensive revisions, but, if you’re like me, that’s where it gets really fun. I know, there are many people who enjoy writing that first draft the most, and many of them may want to create a clean initial draft. I’ve said it many times: every writer works differently, so do what works for you.

Still, for me, with each revision, I get to see the story improve: the pieces fit better together, the characters become more three dimensional, and the twists become more exciting. I get to ensure all parts of the story work together

 

Final Thoughts

I hope this helps other deal with yet another cause of writer’s blog. Just embrace that disordered garbage draft! Give yourself permission to not only write poorly at first, but, if you’re really stuck, write badly on purpose. You know you can later, you can make the prose sing.

“Artistry is important. Skill, hard work, rewriting, editing, and careful, careful craft: All of these are necessary. These are what separate the beginners from experienced artists.” ~ Sarah Kay

 

 

I’m getting to the end of the first draft (or, as I refer to it, the “garbage draft”) of my current novel, Anna, Daughter of Creed. So today, I’m going to share what I plan for the next steps.

Every author works a little–sometimes a lot–differently, but learning how others work can help each of us refine our craft.

This post is for people waiting for my next novel and is a way for me to remain transparent to my readers. It’s also for new authors starting or finishing their first or second novel, and experienced authors who’d like a peek at one writer’s process.

 

Finishing the Garbage Draft

I’m about 71,000 words into Anna, Daughter of Creed, now! I have the ending planned; it has some interesting twists, and my goal is to get it done by San Diego Comic-Con, which my son are attending in a week and a half. I think this draft will come to about 80,000 words, so I need to write about 1,000 words a day. It will be a great feeling to have this book finished!

I started it nearly two years ago and wanted to have it done in about a year. However, even with an outline, the first two attempts didn’t feel quite right. At first, I wrote about 20,000 words, then started again. That time, I got to 61,000, and realized it wasn’t quite right! It sounds crazy, but that’s how it goes sometimes. I’m sure many of you have heard about this sort of thing happening with screenplays. How many movies go through several complete bottom-up rewrites before a studio gets the script that feels right?

Anyway, I’m pleased with the latest draft. This story still has many of the elements you expect from my Creedverse novels if you’ve read my trilogy, The Adventures of Bodacious Creed, but in different measurements. It makes sense. Anna is Creed’s daughter, but while he’s an intelligent action hero, she’s an intellectual who will face danger when needed. You see, a unique balance.

On to the next step after the draft is done!

 

Marking Up the Draft

After writing the first (or garbage, or vomit) draft of a novel, many writers like to print the manuscript and go over it with a pen and highlighter. I haven’t done this with all my books, but I like this, too. However, printing the manuscript on my printer, or getting it done at a print shop like Fed-Ex, costs a lot and doesn’t produce a lasting product.

I’m going to do for Anna, Daughter of Creed what I did for the garbage draft of Bodacious Creed and the San Francisco Syndicate: get a hardcover print of it from Barnes & Noble Press. There, you can either publish books or order personal copies. I’m simply going to make a personal copy of this, double-spaced, and order that. This costs quite less than going to a photocopy shop and looks much nicer.

I should get it shortly after San Diego Comic-Com, and will read over it, highlighting sections and taking notes.

 

Major Edits

With that done, I’ll set the book out on my desk and go through it with the Word manuscript, making changes. This will probably take a few weeks.

Then, I’ll edit the novel solely in Word, using the track change feature, adding scenes as needed, changing details, and so on. I’ll probably end up going over the book a few times this way until I feel the story is solid and the book is well-polished.

 

To ProWritingAid

Next, I’ll use ProWritingAid to catch as many errors as possible. This is a fantastic program that uses AI and other advanced features to check grammar and more.

 

To My Editor, Etc.

Still, it’s not done yet! Every author knows it takes another set of eyes, or maybe several. Even today’s top-notch grammar software doesn’t catch everything. And, even after my editor works on the book, errors will still get through. The point is to get rid of as many as possible and to really polish the prose.

My editor, KH Koehler, who also worked on Bodacious Creed and the Jade Lake and Bodacious Creed and the San Francisco Syndicate, does a fantastic job, and will keep going over the book until we’re both satisfied. She’s an absolute gem.

After her first round of edits, and after I’ve incorporated them, I’ll have Word read the book aloud to me. Of course, this will take about a week, but it’s another way to discover if anything sounds wrong and to fix it. Then, it might go back to K, depending on how it seems to me.

 

Finally, Publication!

The last step is formatting and publishing the book! I use novel format templates provided by KDP. These are excellent and will make it easy to format the book professionally. I’ll also create a header for each chapter, something I eventually did for The Adventures of Bodacious Creed trilogy.

I’ll choose a publication date, and I’m sticking to Tuesdays from now on, which is when major publishers release books, so it’s when many expect book releases. I’ll set up pre-orders, and order a proof copy for myself to make sure it looks right, and when it does, approve it.

I’ll send digital ARCS to potential reviewers. Also, since I run a Kickstarter for each of my books, and, of course, did for this one, I’ll send out digital copies to backers about a week before the book is live to the public. And, I’ll send out the print copies as soon as I receive them after publication.

I expect to have Anna, Daughter of Creed out in early 2025.

Aside from other marketing steps, that’s about it! Yes, once the garbage draft is done, there’s still a lot of work. Some authors dread the revision phase, but I love it. I find it the easiest and most satisfying part, making sure everything fits, finally being able to see the big picture of the story, so I’m eager to get this draft done and to get Anna, Daughter of Creed ready for the public to enjoy.

“Put down everything that comes into your head and then you’re a writer. But an author is one who can judge his own stuff’s worth, without pity, and destroy most of it.” (Casual Chance, 1964) ~ Colette